​Such a soulful dichotomy. To reckon a blissful eternity’s kiss. A touch of two souls of same sort. Of a vista twee and complete. Incarnation of godlike attraction. Sweet lord! Finally, a big bang sparkle deep within. A cosmos dwelling in mind, deriving it’s essence in spirit and soul. 

The escape. The self sabotage. The other half equation to this dichotomy. How to grasp such a thing that shines so splendidly; and fearfully feel my hands tremble to the sound of her voice. The vibrations, the quakes, the tidings of great ramifications whence the patches of umbra get sighted on days that proceed our meet. 

If I be crowned a prince of the celestial skies, her Venus essence and eminence makes all gods shy. Her smile radiates wonder and makes those immortals nothing but little men. Not worthy of her hand, not worthy of her heart. 

Again, I say sweet Lord! This gracious encounter bombards nuclear fusions to radio cosmic disarray. The deity dangling daily in my mind. Do I erase this melody that taps rhapsody hallelujah as she comes gliding in the aisles of my brain? No, cowardice ain’t a trait for gods! 

It’s funny though. I haven’t held her hand, I haven’t opened the windows of my soul through a glance into her eyes and open the floodgates of emotions, as they come roaring in like raging lions! Those searching eyes. Beckoning safety to a wanderer as me, from light years afar. She got stars for eyes. 

Need I say more? Fears slowly being beaten into pulp and dispensed into the blue seas. As buoyant gallantry rises to define a new being. Pursuing her heart like a gent should: and keeping it safe as a best friend would. 

56 Replies to “Blue Dream 

  1. When I read such, I am in awe of whatever/whomever inspires you.I always re-read your articles and they are enchanting, every time.

  2. This is incredible and deep! I admire how you put words so well to make beautiful pieces of art! Good job Bimri👏

  3. A very nice creative piece. I must attest to the fact that indeed you’re a creative thinker.. Everytime i read your articles I’m like woow! Love your works bro.. I envy your talent, keep up

  4. Such a great piece… i love the use of the wordings they are soo deep. Keep up with the good writing.

  5. Too deep!! Your creativity is on point!! You never cease to amaze me, and you definitely know how to make your audience come back for more

  6. Exquisite writing my friend every word carries my breath and heart beat with it. So eloquent so beautifully rendered I am in awe, keep it up

  7. You might not have opened the windows of your soul through a glance into her eyes and open the floodgates of your emotions, but you certainly did to this piece. Good work bimri

  8. Here we go again… Bimri doing his thing.. Loved it.. As per usual I had to read it more than once… A piece I can read over and over…I also had to pull out a dictionary as usual… It makes you think… Takes your mind to plenty of places… N I love the theme/setting… Poems as such are definitely your lane, your use of words and how you tell a story you draw plenty in for the reader to digest. Loved it Rio..keep doing your thing… Don’t ever stop writing!!

  9. “Her smile radiates wonder and makes those immortals nothing but little men. Not worthy of her hand, not worthy of her heart. ”

    Why did I not discover this well of goodness early enough??
    Bimri, you rock!! I love your writing and writing style

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